A MBROSIA
Journal of Fine Haiku
Issue 1 Autumn 2008
ISSN 1943-829X [Print] ISSN 1945-8797 [Digital]
Edited by
Denis M. Garrison
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E ditor’s N ote . In this premiere issue of Ambrosia:
Journal of Fine Haiku , we are pleased to present top
drawer haiku from twenty-eight leading poets from
around the world. All these poets, while writing in
English, respect the formal values of traditional
Japanese haiku. Ambrosia holds that a haiku in English,
to be fine, must have the traditional shape and duration
of haiku, its metre and music, and exhibit some aspects
of traditional Japanese poetic aesthetics. We prefer
haiku written in a natural, modern, English idiom with
great care for the sound of the verse when spoken.
Ambrosia does not require the use of kigo, per se, but
we strongly prefer haiku that utilize the tradition of a
context-setting word, like a kigo, which conveys much
information in a tiny space. Ambrosia considers the
traditional poetic aesthetics of Japan as necessary, not
in order to pay homage to the tradition, but because
without their understanding and skillful use, writing
haiku worth reading is difficult, if not impossible.
Lastly, Ambrosia is looking for powerful haiku. Whether
they are achingly beautiful, painfully poignant, joyfully
lightsome, startling epiphanies, wry, humbling, or
awesome, haiku should touch the reader powerfully.
Our most damning critique is “So what?”
—Denis M. Garrison, editor
long grasses sway
over these prairie graves
a pallid sky
Denis M. Garrison
Baltimore, Maryland, USA
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evening rush hour
the moon
just another headlight
Raffael de Gruttola
Natick, Massachusetts, USA
1
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days of dry wind . . .
pausing under the mulberry
for its sound of rain
Michael McClintock
Fresno, California, USA
2
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frayed sunlight
between the pilings—
summer’s end
Laryalee Fraser
Salmon Arm, British Columbia, Canada
3
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election day
a caddis fly drags
its house of shells
Kirsty Karkow
Waldoboro, Maine, USA
4
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into the dusk
a crow chasing
its cry
Jo McInerney
Australia
5
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the dark-eyed mother . . .
thunder and today, also,
a makeshift supper
Jeffrey Woodward
Detroit, Michigan, USA
6
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desert noon—
a silver lake shimmers
across the road
Francis Masat
Key West, Florida, USA
7
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island holiday
the plop of tennis balls
on the breeze
Dawn Bruce
St. Leonards, NSW, Australia
8
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on grass she shone
under the vast sky—
bare and alone
Aju Mukhopadhyay
Pondicherry, Pudhucherry, India
9
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tea with lemon—
slipping under the door
a cold draft
Adelaide B. Shaw
Millbrook, New York, USA
10
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noon silence—
the windmill is
resting too
Vasile Moldovan
Bucharest City, Romania
11
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autumn fog
rising above the tall pine
blood-orange sun
Paul Smith
Worcester, United Kingdom
12
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the egret
waiting for a reason
to touch its twin
Natalia L. Rudychev
Des Plaines, Illinois, USA
13
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never again
the colors
of this maple leaf
Michele L. Harvey
Brooklyn, New York, USA
14
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Bitter cold—
the mother’s mild face
by the icon lamp
Magdalena Dale
Bucharest, Romania
15
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pond reflection—
the curve of the egret’s neck
ripples
Hortensia Anderson
New York, New York, USA
16
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morning
looking for a cigarette
raindrops
Deborah Finkelstein
Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA
17
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summer morning
the little league outfield
chasing butterflies
Bob Lucky
Hangzhou, China
18
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a shiver
in the fallen leaves
passing cloud
Bill Kenney
Queens, New York, USA
19
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This river-pearl pendant—
dimpled like tonight’s
August moon.
Alexis Rotella
Arnold, Maryland, USA
20
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morning
a young buck parting
common reed
Tish Davis
Dublin, Ohio, USA
21
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autumn dusk
a cruise ship twinkles
before the stars
Susan Constable
Nanoose Bay, British Columbia, Canada
22
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stepping outside
for the first time in three days—
night air
Shawn Bowman
Cleveland, Ohio USA
23
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the great horned owl
stops hooting:
a murder of crows
Raffael de Gruttola
Natick, Massachusetts, USA
24
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geese at twilight . . .
adding fireflies to the list
of summer memories
Michael McClintock
Fresno, California, USA
25
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snow on the deck,
the old wooden sailboat waits
by the empty pier
M. Kei
Perryville, Maryland, USA
26
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longest day—
dust galaxies slide
through the shutters
Lorin Ford
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
27
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a rainbow
over autumn maples . . .
the laundry forgotten
Laryalee Fraser
Salmon Arm, British Columbia, Canada
28
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my daughter’s shadow
dances in the trees, their leaves
singing to the stars
Kiwanda Paul
Eastampton, New Jersey, USA
29
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so quickly!
the shadow of a cloud
overtakes my own
Kirsty Karkow
Waldoboro, Maine, USA
30
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country churchyard
under morning glories
sunken earth
Jo McInerney
Australia
31
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looking through
the winter grove
to a meadow beyond
Jeffrey Woodward
Detroit, Michigan, USA
32
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grey puddle
ticking steadily
a wing-torn moth
Gina
Launceston, Tasmania, Australia
33
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night swamp
the boom of an alligator
felt more than heard
Francis Masat
Key West, Florida, USA
34
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biting wind—
the altar’s votives
faulter
Dennis M. Holmes (chibi)
Silver Creek, Georgia, USA
35
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two stray cats
huddle together . . .
plum-blue sky
Dawn Bruce
St. Leonards, NSW, Australia
36
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an eerie afternoon;
suddenly flows the cool breeze—
fragrant through garden
Aju Mukhopadhyay
Pondicherry, Pudhucherry, India
37
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a fallen pear—
the unblemished side
facing up
Adelaide B. Shaw
Millbrook, New York, USA
38
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the cat
crowds the doorstep
winter sunshine
Gina
Launceston, Tasmania, Australia
39
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living in the coat
even as it unravels—
the depth of winter
Jeffrey Woodward
Detroit, Michigan, USA
40
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sand and salt
in my hair . . .
sea dreaming
Jo McInerney
Australia
41
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au plein air
a little of the blue lake
wets my lip
Kirsty Karkow
Waldoboro, Maine, USA
42
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a child’s soft hymn drifts
east towards mecca, africa
rising from her throat
Kiwanda Paul
Eastampton, New Jersey, USA
43
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lightning storm—
biting into the blackness
of licorice
Laryalee Fraser
Salmon Arm, British Columbia, Canada
44
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a tortoiseshell cat
in the last of the sunlight
autumn leaves
Lorin Ford
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
45
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unexpected catch,
a great blue crab scuttles
across the deck
M. Kei
Perryville, Maryland, USA
46
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a pair of women,
one tilting her head . . .
the spring buds
Michael McClintock
Fresno, California, USA
47
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last leaf—
a red-winged blackbird
sways in the wind
Raffael de Gruttola
Natick, Massachusetts, USA
48
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In the creek bed
tadpoles swimming
after we’ve gone
Shawn Bowman
Cleveland, Ohio USA
49
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end of summer
the sound of her paddle
dripping
Susan Constable
Nanoose Bay, British Columbia, Canada
50
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shooting star
coyote running along
fence posts
Tish Davis
Dublin, Ohio, USA
51
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Rain puddle—
with his paw a cat moves
the clouds along.
Alexis Rotella
Arnold, Maryland, USA
52
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my son changes
his daughter’s diaper
autumn evening
Bill Kenney
Queens, New York, USA
53
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in the dark
the sound of the surf
crashing
Bob Lucky
Hangzhou, China
54
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gust of wind—
the full moon shudders
in a pail of water
Hortensia Anderson
New York, New York, USA
55
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Fierce blizzard
frozen flowers on the glass . . .
your hot breath
Magdalena Dale
Bucharest, Romania
56
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broom straws
bent by habit
migrating geese
Michele L. Harvey
Brooklyn, New York, USA
57
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warming up
the light of fire
through a hand
Natalia L. Rudychev
Des Plaines, Illinois, USA
58
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at times
along this mountain path
not even a breeze
Paul Smith
Worcester, United Kingdom
59
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all the fireflies
die out suddenly . . .
New Year’s fireworks
Vasile Moldovan
Bucharest City, Romania
60
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November rain
falling softly on sodden leaves
slow footsteps
Adelaide B. Shaw
Millbrook, New York, USA
61
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summer dawn
lemon scented gum trees
lean into the light
Dawn Bruce
St. Leonards, NSW, Australia
62
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the first page
of my pocket journal—
snow day
Dennis M. Holmes (chibi)
Silver Creek, Georgia, USA
63
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water hole—
something in the shadows
waits for me to leave
Francis Masat
Key West, Florida, USA
64
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apricots
rotting under the tree
a step ladder
Gina
Launceston, Tasmania, Australia
65
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two chairs
with a table in common—
a winter evening
Jeffrey Woodward
Detroit, Michigan, USA
66
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slipstream
a little black cormorant
snatches a bream
Jo McInerney
Australia
67
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half-mown field . . .
the tree’s first apple
warm in his hand
Kirsty Karkow
Waldoboro, Maine, USA
68
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dragonfly—
skirting the edge
of a heron’s stillness
Laryalee Fraser
Salmon Arm, British Columbia, Canada
69
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cold mountain
a thin cloud
over her shoulder
Lorin Ford
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
70
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in the twilight
a nighthawk calls—
a star appears
Francis Masat
Key West, Florida, USA
71
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the cat returns
with a mouth full of moth
fading moon
Jo McInerney
Australia
72
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cornflowers—
between the clouds
a handful of sky
Laryalee Fraser
Salmon Arm, British Columbia, Canada
73
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hungry,
but the cat is sleeping
in his lap
M. Kei
Perryville, Maryland, USA
74
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high summer . . .
sands from Mongolia
dust the vineyard
Michael McClintock
Fresno, California, USA
75
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bumper to bumper
the monarch changes lanes
uncontested
Raffael de Gruttola
Natick, Massachusetts, USA
76
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cool evening
chardonnay with a hint
of rain
Shawn Bowman
Cleveland, Ohio USA
77
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last day of summer
a boy’s fishing line
catches the sun
Susan Constable
Nanoose Bay, British Columbia, Canada
78
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morning bells
cicada skins clinging
to the bark
Tish Davis
Dublin, Ohio, USA
79
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a rush of starlings
over the highway . . .
the things I don’t know
Bill Kenney
Queens, New York, USA
80
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small pond—
even after a big splash
the ripples fade
Francis Masat
Key West, Florida, USA
81
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wattle dust
summer’s afterglow
on my fingers
Jo McInerney
Australia
82
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drowsy morning . . .
the bird that belongs
to the song
Laryalee Fraser
Salmon Arm, British Columbia, Canada
83
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a window opens
somewhere in the house
an evening thrush
Michael McClintock
Fresno, California, USA
84
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sidewalk chalk
children drawing circles
around mayflies
Tish Davis
Dublin, Ohio, USA
85
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no letter from you . . .
watching a mockingbird
chase a butterfly
Raffael de Gruttola
Natick, Massachusetts, USA
86
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bumper crop
the gaping mouths
of Mason jars
Susan Constable
Nanoose Bay, British Columbia, Canada
87
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from a branch
a clump of snow falls—
sharp-shinned hawk
Raffael de Gruttola
Natick, Massachusetts, USA
88
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museum garden
the butterfly pauses
before a flower
Bill Kenney
Queens, New York, USA
89
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summer evening
the moon’s reflection lost
in glowing plankton
Bob Lucky
Hangzhou, China
90
Issue 1, Autumn 2008
fallen apple
a swarm of yellow-jackets
deep in the bruise
Susan Constable
Nanoose Bay, British Columbia, Canada
91
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winter tree
the children learn
subtraction
Bill Kenney
Queens, New York, USA
92
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jade hairpin—
another shade of green
in the grass
Hortensia Anderson
New York, New York, USA
93
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wood smoke
the curl of cats
around each other
Michele L. Harvey
Brooklyn, New York, USA
94
Issue 1, Autumn 2008
a moth enters
the silence between us
leaves
Natalia L. Rudychev
Des Plaines, Illinois, USA
95
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winter day—
all the rose thorns
wear white caps
Vasile Moldovan
Bucharest City, Romania
96
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the farmhouse
no longer hidden—
winter trees
Hortensia Anderson
New York, New York, USA
97
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cold snap
his morning hug
a little longer
Michele L. Harvey
Brooklyn, New York, USA
98
Issue 1, Autumn 2008
cutting
our walk short—
blackberries
Susan Constable
Nanoose Bay, British Columbia, Canada
99
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the fog settles—
a black fin disappears
in silence
Francis Masat
Key West, Florida, USA
100
Index
Anderson, Hortensia, 16, 55, 93, 97.
Bowman, Shawn, 23, 49, 77.
Bruce, Dawn, 8, 36, 62.
Constable, Susan, 22, 50, 78, 87, 91, 99.
Dale, Magdalena, 15, 56.
Davis, Tish, 21, 51, 79,85.
de Gruttola, Raffael, 1, 24, 48, 76, 86, 88.
Finkelstein, Deborah, 17.
Ford, Lorin, 27, 45, 70.
Fraser, Laryalee, 3, 28, 44, 69, 73, 83.
Gina, 33, 39, 65.
Harvey, Michele L., 14, 57, 94, 98.
Holmes, Dennis M. (chibi), 35, 63.
Karkow, Kirsty, 4, 30, 42, 68.
Kei, M., 26, 46, 74,
Kenney, Bill, 19, 53, 80, 89, 92.
Lucky, Bob, 18, 54, 90.
Masat, Francis, 7, 34, 64, 71, 81, 100.
McClintock, Michael, 2, 25, 47, 75, 84.
McInerney, Jo, 5, 31, 41, 67, 72, 82.
Moldovan, Vasile, 11, 60, 96.
Mukhopadhyay, Aju, 9, 37.
Paul, Kiwanda, 29, 43.
Rotella, Alexis, 20, 52.
Rudychev, Natalia L., 13, 58, 95.
Shaw, Adelaide B., 10, 38, 61.
Smith, Paul, 12, 59.
Woodward, Jeffrey, 6, 32, 40, 66.
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